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Finally
Contributed by
Bruce
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:12:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Finally
When a dream you have had for many years
in reality, has Finally come true
And the one, you have been so in love with
is Finally there with you
The love that you both have had
having grown day by day
Has brought you both together
Finally finding its way
Sometimes in life, a dream comes true
and life becomes a joy
How wonderful it has become
for this lonesome girl and boy
You can Finally go through life
with your lover by your side
Never again worrying about
the feelings you had to hide
The magic you two have
puts electricity in the air
People all around you
can only stop and stare
Envy in their eyes
at such a beautiful sight
The life that the two of you now have
has become a pure delight
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-10-02 05:12:43]
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Re: Finally
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:21:15 AM AEST
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such a sweet poem bruce
keep it up
well done
luv
jenni
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Re: Finally
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 06:40:16 AM AEST
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Incredibly beautifull write.
One can feel your joy.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Finally
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by inoc on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:07:48 AM AEST
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what a splendid couple....not many are like that enough...your write shows that it is ...possible
con9i |
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Re: Finally
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:37:10 PM AEST
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This is so sweet and tender... it should be in a song! Great write, keep it up.. Ciao,
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Re: Finally
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by anangel_1593 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:37:40 PM AEST
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| This is so sweet and tender... it should be in a song! Great write, keep it up.. Ciao |
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Re: Finally
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by gwenevere on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:58:14 PM AEST
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| Bruce this is lovely.It sure is a wonderful feeeling to find your soul mate and you have captured such a feeling, Ros |
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Re: Finally
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:25:28 AM AEST
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A beautifully written poem u have here Bruce. Love pours out through the verses. Sue *sighs* some people are just lucky I guess. A great enjoyable write. Thanks for sharing it.
*hugs*
Sue, ED. |
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Re: Finally
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th October 2005 @ 09:27:44 AM AEST
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ah......sweet rapture. Bruce, this was lovely and such a delight to read.
I especially liked the second last stanza,
"the magic you two have puts electricity in the air
People all around you can only stop and stare"
wow, I mean, just wow. Such a touching and heartwarming creation.
Lucky, lucky girl !!
~Breezy
(who is very glad she dropped in....) |
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Re: Finally
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by thedreamfairyalways on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:41:34 PM AEST
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| magical! please write more like this! almost like being there. |
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