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Goodbye Mum
Contributed by
OzChick
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:48:03 AM in AEST
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You nurtured me and watched me grow.
When the time was right, you let me go.
I left my childhood to become a wife.
You have lived out the days of your life.
Now it is time for me to be strong.
For you are the one who is moving on.
Though this is hard, I know I must try.
To smile through my tears and say, Goodbye.
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OzChick
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2005-10-02 03:48:03]
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Re: Goodbye Mum
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by kerrah681 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:56:43 AM AEST
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| This is so pretty, Im amom and I love my babies, I love my momma too, I love the way it states that u say Goodbye, be strong this poem is beautiful. Thanks so much for sharing it |
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Re: Goodbye Mum
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:42:36 AM AEST
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Such a luving, moving, strong yet tender write.
Sorry for your loss. I lost mine in 1979 with melanoma cancer.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Goodbye Mum
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by Spike on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 09:24:49 AM AEST
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Well written, poetic, and the sentiment almost brought this guy to tears. The exchange of roles- the one who leaves/the one who stays - was very neatly and beautifully written. I think your mom would be proud.
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