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The Reaper's hole.
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:22:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Life is a dream on the way to death
so you better step back and hold your breath
as you tumble down the Reaper's hole
falling faster and faster as you lose your soul
you pray to god to take your life
but instead you get cut by the Reaper's scythe
your body goes limp and you start to feel numb
you try to make sence but you know what's to come
the end is near.....can't you hear....the voices inside
do you even remember how you died?
It doesn't matter because you can't redeem
anything that's happened in a dream.
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Dragontear27
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2005-10-02 02:22:54]
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Re: The Reaper's hole.
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by goddessofangels on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:44:52 AM AEST
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Re: The Reaper's hole.
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by kerrah681 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:53:53 AM AEST
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| Indeed by evil I am intrigued, this is good, I can see what your trying to convey by using the word reaper so much, you should read my poems thier all about the evils inside......But back 2 u of course, I feel very much like this poem has a lot to offer, I wouldn't change anything, just keep in mind that when your writing, let it just go, poetry is best when your runnin around looking for a pen and a paper because something comes over you to create a masterpiece, wonderful poem, thanks for sharing... |
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