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Regret Me Not
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:43:36 PM in AEST
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Your words hurt me
this I can't deny
Out to bash me
but I don't understand why
I was honest with you
not a word of a lie
I confided in you
but you won't even try
You said you wished to 'free me'
tell me, what was it you meant?
Instead you went and deceived me
(but I can't think of time better spent...)
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:46:27 PM AEST
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| if only i had such a good attitude. this was a good post scorpie. you seem to be going back to your more simpler rhymes these days, any reason why? and rhyming the same words too. tsk tsk =] ::liked the ending:: |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by PrincessJen on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:54:31 PM AEST
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| Great write. I wish I could look at a situation like that...good luck |
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:08:47 PM AEST
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| bitter sweet, and very heartfelt, awesome write Scorpy |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:39:07 PM AEST
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This was an excellent little poem, and I think it delivered the message you were aiming at quite well, but it was a teeny bit simplistic with the rhyming is all. The best stanza was of course the last one, and I liked your use of brackets there. The subject matter too was something I myself enjoy to write about, and you pulled it off rather nicely. I just love that last line, lol if I mention it again by the time I finish this comment I wouldn't be surprised. I've been in this scenario so many times recently and it just helped your write speak to me *that* much more. Great write...
...and great last line! (lol see? I mentioned it again :P ) |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 12:47:39 AM AEST
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ahh love is certainly a twisted thing
well done... |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by jezebelinhell on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:38:14 AM AEST
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| Well written. People are so bad at just saying what they mean, and feel. I hate people who hide behind lame excuses. |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Darkhorse71 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:15:00 AM AEST
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This is a great write. I know nothing in life comes easy, but I don't see how you can have such a good attitude in this situation. I'm envious!!!
peace and hugs, john |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 04:10:05 AM AEST
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As usual you never disappoint me in your writing...how unfortunate though that you have to write about disappointment. I hope someday, sooner than later, you will no longer have to write poems like this one. Not saying you don't write great, you do. This is a brilliant write and you are such a kind soul...in the middle of your anguish and pain you still love through all that. You are the Scorperiffic without any doubt in my mind. Fantastic person; fantastic writing.
Take care, Scorpenator.
opTIMistic
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by emystar on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 07:55:53 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
Everyone else have mostly sad it.Good work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by AshRayne on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:19:19 PM AEST
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"You said you wished to 'free me'
tell me, what was it you meant?
Instead you went and deceived me
(but I can't think of time better spent...)"
my favorite part, i think. gorgeous. absolutely gorgeous.
hats off to you.
exquisite writing that is your gift, be blessed, for you are perfection.
~Ash |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 10:05:23 PM AEST
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wow sorry scorp, somthings not right, and of course poetically beautiful and full of spark this one is hope all is ok . . .
((((((((scorp))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by wizard on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:19:12 AM AEST
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hi...nice write. i like the positive you pulled out of the negative situation..sorry you were hurt though :(
wiz |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:47:36 PM AEST
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A cleverly written poem u have here Scorp. I love ur positive attitude girl. I'm so sorry that u got hurt in the process though my dear friend.
A remarkable piece of writing by a remarkable talented lady.
I hope things are better with u my dear friend. May ur beautiful heart find the true love and respect that it deserves.
Heartfelt hugs for such a dear sweet friend,
Sue, ED.
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 07:33:02 PM AEST
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woa deep very deep.
Life really sucks sometimes .
great write Scorp.
hugs |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:33:35 PM AEST
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Great write.. Again another excellent poem.. Take care
christina |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by jyssvw22 on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:36:02 AM AEST
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this moved me.
thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Regret Me Not
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST
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| This is a great write. I like the honesty in this. |
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