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Identity
Contributed by
black_star
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:37:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It clings to you like spider to web,
When whole it is your life,
Not visible, but clearly felt,
It gives you hope in strife.
Over time it just grows stronger,
Some glimpse it, but not it’s whole,
Not even you can read it all,
Or write it down to scroll.
The danger lies when no one sees,
Swoops down, with open claws,
It’s ripped out of your being,
Heartless: as if with saws.
Without it you are lifeless,
Although life lingers still,
Identity is who you are,
You love, your life, your will.
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black_star
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2005-10-01 21:37:29]
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Re: Identity
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:49:34 PM AEST
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Interesting piece, perceptive and thoughtfully written. I liked the third stanza's expressiveness best.
Keep writing.
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Re: Identity
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by sararose1950 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:51:13 AM AEST
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| very truthful- it is truly all we really possess in life that is ours alone |
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