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Is Love?
Contributed by
blackpoetryqueen
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 06:34:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Is Love?
This heartbreak my pure heart can’t take
The reason for being betrayed and used
Maybe the reason why I cry endlessly
My motive to keep taking you back
If this is Love I rather walk away now
Than stay here and have this everlasting pain
My heart can only take so much, it’s had enough
Even though it does hurt for me to walk
It’s going to heart me even more if I stay
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Re: Is Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by jheng on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:33:33 PM AEST (User
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great poem, im in the same situation, and i can truly say that its not easy to walk away from the one you love, hope you have more courage than i am ... |
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Re: Is Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by PrincessJen on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:11:29 PM AEST (User
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Your a great writer....Thank you for sharing. I just realized what I already knew all along...I just needed someone to point it out.....Thank you and good luck |
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Re: Is Love?
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokenwings on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:25:18 AM AEST (User
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i truely know how you feel, there are better loves out there. but you wrote this so well,
keep it up.
tasha |
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