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Her hugs are drugging all my words
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:55:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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She snorts her pills and says "I do"
I heard love kills...well, is it true?
she walks with me on streets of night
I heard her say "it's me, don't fight!"
Her shadow's pouring into me!!
I can't see the fresh cut flowers
Help me set the clown's smile free
before the laughter soon devours!
She crushes pills and melts me down
I think it's late....too late to frown
she guides me through the alley's blue
i never knew my addictions grew
Her hugs are drugging all my words
so I can't help my lonely tears
They fall like many tired birds
while in the forest, no one hears...
no one hears.
dw
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Re: Her hugs are drugging all my words
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by kerrah681 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:14:48 PM AEST
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| Addiction becomes a base for so many writers, it is mine as well, Im in a constant battle with this. This poem is very good, I can't say how much I relate, because that would be wrong, I relate to addiction, but your words are yours,,,,just yours, God, really excellent poem its soft and pretty, yet dark and ugly, Addiction is a catch22, no matter what u do, it seems like its just too powerful. You really had me reading this a couple of times, its very intriguing, anyway I wish you well, be strong.....Life is what we make of it, I have to tell myself this too, but uhhhhhhh, I don't even listen! |
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Re: Her hugs are drugging all my words
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:46:05 PM AEST
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| an awesome poem, well done |
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Re: Her hugs are drugging all my words
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by jeza on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 08:15:26 PM AEST
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wow this poem is amazing wow
a great poem
Jeza |
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