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Tell Me You'll Leave
Contributed by
tres_estrellas
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:33:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Don't let me down
Just let me be
I want you to see
what you're doing to me
I never understood you
and all the things you do
I hated to love you
and the love hurt me too
so tell me you'll leave
I can't do this anymore
or tell me you love me
because I feel unsure
I didn't want you to go
but your love didn't show
when I just needed to know
that you loved me so
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Re: Tell Me You'll Leave
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:25:16 PM AEST
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Love-- you can't live with it, can't live without it. You did a great job putting those crazy emotions into words. You feel so hopeless and out of control when you are going through it.
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Re: Tell Me You'll Leave
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:30:32 AM AEST
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i understand, good write,,
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Re: Tell Me You'll Leave
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by justkevi on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 01:15:32 AM AEST
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The concept of hating loving, where you love, but you loathe the fact that you feel those emotions, is awesome. Good job demonstrating.
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