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knew me at all
Contributed by
uniQue1
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:33:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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How can I just let you walk away
Just let you leave without a trace
When I stand here taking my every breath with you
You're the only one who really knew me at all
How can you just walk away from me
When all I can do is watch you leave?
'Cause we shared the laughter and the pain
And even shared the tears
You're the only one who really knew me at all
So take a look at me now
There's just an empty space
There's nothing left here to remind me
Just the memory of your face
But take a look at me now
There's just an empty space
And you coming back to me is against the odds
And that's what I've gotta face
I wish I could just make you turn around
Turn around and see me cry
There's so much I need to say to you
So many reasons why
You're the only one who really knew me at all
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Re: knew me at all
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:14:27 AM AEST
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this is a really emotional write..you expressed it so well and with great form...my fave. lines:
"So take a look at me now
There's just an empty space
There's nothing left here to remind me
Just the memory of your face"
i just love the way those 4 lines flow....beautifully written.
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Re: knew me at all
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by myfinalbreath on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 12:15:37 AM AEST
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this is an awesome write. it describes to a tee the way that i feel right now. if this is about something that has happened to you, then it seems that we have something in common. message me if you ever wanna talk. keep up the good work!
~Lindsay
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