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silent tears
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:25:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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my silent tears
fall to the ground
as i cry without
making a sound
a river flowing
from my eyes
as to this world
i say my goodbyes
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
... [
2005-10-01 09:25:46]
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Re: silent tears
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:11:27 AM AEST
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| simple and short yet has so much emotion..thank you for sharing this, and i'm sorry that you must feel this way....you probably get this alot as do I, but if you ever need someone to talk to my ears and eyes are always open.;) |
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Re: silent tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:57:54 PM AEST
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| short but well written. keep it up! |
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Re: silent tears
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by xPixiexDustx on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:50:26 PM AEST
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| Short but very powerful. Love it. =) |
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Re: silent tears
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 02:45:19 PM AEST
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Flowing.. tears.. down the river, emptying feelings.
Powerful write
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: silent tears
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 10:21:04 PM AEST
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aww... this was great, sad, short, but powerful... very powerful. i really liked this write. it was well written, just wish you didn't feel this way. look for the ones that love you and get away from the ones that don't. great write, though, keep up the great work!!
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Re: silent tears
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by Tru2Myself on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:32:22 PM AEST
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Thats the best thing I've read all day. Haha. Feel loved because I've read a lot. That was amazing. Short but very meaningful. Perfect. Loved it.
Lauren |
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