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monster
Contributed by
judasman
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:46:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a sad pathetic little child
no respect for life
selfish and uncaring
a cruel tyrant
a ruthless killer
an evil tormentor
the wrath of a vicious sadistic boy
grotesque acts of violence
the younger always suffered
evil fits of temper
the sheer spite of one little boy
selfish and uncaring
not knowing when to stop
enjoying the power over the minor
an evil vicious way of living
I WAS MONSTER
Copyright ©
judasman
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2005-10-01 08:46:07]
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Re: monster
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:35:25 AM AEST
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| This is a very honest write. It is very similar to a song I wrote called "I see a monster". I like it, you don't smooth anything over. I thinl that is always a good quality. |
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Re: monster
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by brew on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:29:39 PM AEST
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Hope the monster left. Good self write for the inner of all.
Brew~ |
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Re: monster
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 02:38:28 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem. Believe me there are times in my life that I think I am a monster too! |
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