|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
how those words choke me now
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 06:13:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
|
that song still makes me cry
i still choke on the words
through the sobs and the sighs
i remember you
i remember what you did to me
the irony in the lyrics
"come up to meet you, tell you im sorry, dont know how lovely you are"
You didnt mean it when you said i love you.
but now - all choked up singing that song.
I know i never needed you.
Only wanted you.
And now im over you.
but still the words choke me.
About how you used me.
And how i used to feel.
"nobody said it was easy..."
Nobody said it would be this hard
Copyright ©
surge_joebot
... [
2005-10-01 06:13:44]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: how those words choke me now
(User Rating: 1 )
by reecy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 06:58:13 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Your poem is touching the rhymthem is good and it flows very well. i love the idea of using one line of song lyric in your poem. it strengthens it and andds depth. also making it easy for people to realte to, and i understand where your coming from! when my ex split i used to lsiten to that song(scientists coldplay)every nite before i went to sleep. the words are extremly sad.. and i understand when you meen in "the irony in the lyrics" words hurt.. and when we are left, they seem to be what we cling on to. unfortantly the loss doesnt go but the pain does get better! chin up!
lau |
|
|
Re: how those words choke me now
(User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:11:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Chin up....From this you wrote a very good poem....God Bless! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
