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No cure for what I have
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 03:29:42 AM in AEST
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I have never felt like cutting so bad
Never felt this desperate to hurt
I don’t know what to do anymore
I’m slipping away slowly into nothing
I am falling and I can’t stop
Till I hit the ground hard
When I do I won’t be ale to get back up
Not ever sure I want to get back
I feel so bad
Clinical depression
Self diagnosis
No cure
No cure for what I have
Only treatment that never works
It only makes me worse
It just numbs me till it fades
And then it’s back to the blade
Wishing that this life would finish me off
Till it does its cough after cough
Till I start to bleed
Bleeding from the inside
Just as much as the out
It’s being eaten away at from
Within
Does anything I do matter
To any one at all
Do my words still mean anything?
I wish I did not feel this way
But I guess I am use to it
I have never felt so bad before
Every time I say that
I really do feel worse
I’m falling fast
From grace
Losing face
Just done know what
To do any more
No one feels anything for me
It just all seems so fake
Made up because they feel sorry
Sorry for me for what I am
I don’t know what to do anymore
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Re: No cure for what I have
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 04:31:39 AM AEST
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I have some ideas for you because I too struggle with depression. Do you want to know ask me!
Your poem is well written and people can definately relate to you. I know I can. |
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Re: No cure for what I have
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by Mild_Tempest on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:47:36 PM AEST
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| I'm so sorry, i've had that feeling a lot. It's never fun. Nonetheless fantastic write! |
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Re: No cure for what I have
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:02:09 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel. I used to cut myself all the time. If you ever need anyone to talk to or just to listen to you, you can always message me and i'll do what i can for you. This is a great poem to. I'll be sure to read more of your work. Keep writing :) |
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Re: No cure for what I have
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by jezebelinhell on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 02:14:17 AM AEST
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| You are a truly great writer. I love this poem! I have been struggling with the same feelings for 10 years, since the age of 16, and it is a daily struggle. But depression is a disease that you can live with. The most important thing is to talk to people, and to know that your feelings are important and valid. If you ever need to talk, I am here. |
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Re: No cure for what I have
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by Gothchyk on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 05:03:22 AM AEST
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| i read this poem and my heart just sank, i'm sorry to hear this, although beautifully written i know it holds truth. just know you are never alone in anything that go through. |
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