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Can't wake up
Contributed by
HiddenDeath999
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Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:12:12 AM in AEST
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Can't wake up,
I'm lost in my head,
you've killed me inside
I cannot handle love,
it is too much for me to take,
I've told you that
I cant breathe,
I'm dead inside,
yet all my thoughts are on you
When you love somone you can't let go,
when you really love someone you can'y just be friends,
when you love that person you can't say goodbye
You gave me love,
something I've never had before,
you can't just leave me
If I can't have you,
it's best I stay away,
stay away from this place
I love you so much,
it hurts,
it's killing me
I WANT TO SCREAM IT IN YOUR EAR SO YOU CAN HEAR ME CLEARLY,
I need you,
I cannot live without
Copyright ©
HiddenDeath999
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2005-10-01 00:12:12]
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Re: Can't wake up
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:33:29 AM AEST
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| Just say it to the person already! LOUD WORDS can not be read only spoken. Good write |
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Re: Can't wake up
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by emystar on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:14:18 AM AEST
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Very sad but well written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Can't wake up
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by judasman on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:59:18 AM AEST
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| got the idea running around in my head that its you who's stopping you having the one you love. may very well be wrong. but good write anyway |
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Re: Can't wake up
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by brew on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:49:46 AM AEST
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Agreed with Archie, Tell them....maybe they will see, and then again maybe they wont.! Got to be told........well penned tho.
Brew~ |
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