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1,2,3,4
Contributed by
morgana
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 11:36:30 PM in AEST
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1,2,3,4
Watch your blood pour on the floor....
5,6,7,8
You want to stop but it's to late....
9...10....
Now your dead
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morgana
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2005-09-30 23:36:30]
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Re: 1,2,3,4
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 11:47:27 PM AEST
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| well i think this would be better if it went with that little school rhyme thing of one, two buckle my shoes. id like the numbers spelled out also. at the end i think you need a word to rhyme with ten, to keep with the format. a better since of flow would really enhance this also. |
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Re: 1,2,3,4
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 12:35:19 AM AEST
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Uhm Freddy Krouger?
But it is good to just have fun writing so i can't give any bad marks for this. |
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