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I hear you
Contributed by
Evening_Star
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:28:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Alone
Detached
Lost in my own mind
Everyone around me stares and snickers
I hear them
I know they are talking about me
I hear them
In my thoughts
In my dreams
In my reality
Yet there is nothing I can do
I revert deeper and deeper inside my mind
Trying hard to desperately escape their torture
But I can still hear them taunting me
Like a light through the darkness
I hear your voice
Trying to break through
It's too late
Before I know it
You decieve me
It darkens
You are just like everyone else
I try to hide
Away from you
Away from everything I know
Deeper and deeper I fall
Into my hole
Consumed by my own torment
Just trying to escape
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2005-09-30 20:28:16]
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Re: I hear you
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:27:56 PM AEST
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Beautifully described anguish of a soul imprisoned
Paihfully sensitive to taunts and disdain coming at it from the outside.
Why not just ignore these forces and step beyond.over their heads :)
I love the pyramidal form.
Beautifully penned
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Re: I hear you
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:55:19 PM AEST
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This is good. Don't come too much of a recluse though or you will miss out on the joy that people bring.
People hurt people that is the way of life that's why we have the words "I'm sorry" |
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