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Want vs. Need
Contributed by
Shnannon
on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:02:16 PM in AEST
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I want to talk.
I need to talk.
I want advice.
I need advice.
I want assurances.
I need assurances.
I want to let it out.
I need to let it out.
But I'm afriad to talk
I'm scare that you'll judge me.
I'm afraid to receive your advice
In case it's something I don't want to hear.
I'm afraid to accept your assurances
I'm nervous to have you know.
I'm afraid to let it out
It might do more damage on the outside than it is on the inside.
So please...
Talk to me.
Advise me.
Assure me.
Let me let it out.
Copyright ©
Shnannon
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2005-09-30 19:02:16]
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Re: Want vs. Need
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by allowanceofthoughts on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:08:26 PM AEST
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| That sounds like a scream I once had. I really liked because I could feel it inside. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Want vs. Need
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:36:20 PM AEST
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| cool write neat idea keep up the cool write |
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Re: Want vs. Need
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by Loende on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:23:38 PM AEST
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Ah yes... it is quite a cunundrum, isn't it? This was very well prepared! Good job with it and keep up the great work.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: Want vs. Need
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by mjiann on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:16:39 PM AEST
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| i like the rhythm to it. well written |
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Re: Want vs. Need
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by Spazzo on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:51:05 AM AEST
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Wow, this is so awesome. I can relate to it a lot right now hehe.
Scott |
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