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It's okay to ask
Contributed by
Archie
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 06:47:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If you have not seen me in a while
and you just want to talk
It's okay to say Archie
can we just go for a walk
I know I may seem busy
formulating plans
and I lose sight of things sometimes
for I am but a man
If it seems that I've forgotten things
that we said we would do
a gentle reminder will not hurt
What I'm saying to you now
I thought you already knew
as my friend you had only to ask
If I don't know
I can not help you
and many times
I can be dense
It is not wrong
for you to call me
reminding me
of what comes next
If you just up and leave me
and you say that I don't care
without giving me half a chance
All that I can say in response to you
you had only to ask
What you need I probably would give to you
if you would only ask
Copyright ©
Archie
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2005-09-30 18:47:16]
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by Evening_Star on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:36:05 PM AEST
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| I would agree with you that it speaks for itself. People often forget that all they need to do is ask. You reminded me of the same words that my mom said to me so long ago |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 11:59:50 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 05:18:31 PM AEST
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I really like this one Archie. It's honest and direct. Friendships are very important, and it's a real shame when something silly comes between one.
Good job, and I hope things are worked out between you and your friend...
Scorp. |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by Spike on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 08:55:14 AM AEST
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Archie, you have written the anthem for every man in their relationships with others. I will think of it the next time I am accused of being vague, indifferent, uncaring, insensitive, self-absorbed, aloof (the list goes on).......
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by secretwind on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 09:57:54 PM AEST
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| another excellent flow |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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The title does speak for itself. An honest and direct write u have here dearest Archie.
I like the way u brought this across to ur reader. Well done dear friend.
*hugs*
Sue, ED. |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by inoc on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:22:24 AM AEST
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Your write is -another beautiful piece-
what you have written is something many of us can relate to...thankyou
coni |
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Re: It's okay to ask
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:03:11 PM AEST
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After all, we're only humans, with limited minds. Still, this is, for me a reminder, that i should look before the asking.
Take care.
David |
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