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Beautiful Suicide
Contributed by
xPixiexDustx
on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 04:59:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Nothing feels right today
My life seems as if its gone astray
I don't wanna see tomorrow
My life is full of emptiness and sorrow.
I don't wanna feel this pain anymore
So I go to my room and lock the door
Thousands of thoughts race through my mind
I just can't take it this time
As depression slowly sinks in...
The thoughts grow stronger, of committing this sin
These secrets that I hold inside..
Are tearing me apart
The suffering, I can no longer Hide
This is the end, there is no start.
It's time to make this pain subside
It'll be my Beautiful Suicide.
Help me, comfort me please
All I want is for my mind to be at ease
I sit and begin to write my Good-Bye's
A lump forms in my throat, tears gather in my eyes
I scribble down a few more "Its not your fault" And "I Love You's"
"But Everything that I thought was real, turned out to be Un-true
So, I guess this Good-Bye, No need to cry, I know you Disagree...
But no worries, soon I'll be happy and free...
Sincerely yours, Me."
I take the razor blade firmly in my hand
And begin to do what I have planned
Blood begins to spill from my wrists
In a few minutes I will no Longer exist
I feel my heart begin to slow, the room becomes dim
I feel the pain released from within
When morning comes, it'll be to late
Little did they know I had so much hate.
They'll find my lifeless body, pale and cold
And they'll wonder what I held inside, un told
They'll all gather to mourn my death, sit in disbelief and cry
For what reasons I did this, they'll always wonder why....
They wouldn't understand anyways, even if they tried.
I know I've hurt all of you deeply, that I can't deny..
But I'm not sorry that I said, Good-Bye.
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xPixiexDustx
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2005-09-30 16:59:42]
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by emokid on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:21:37 PM AEST
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great job you captured that one moment where your vision so clear as to see the faces crying at the wake. I tryied to do this but it has seemed to elude me. Great job again and glad that you're alive.
Ian the emokid |
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:41:16 PM AEST
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| You captured in your poem well an answer to a question I asked in the poem "And you're gone" about suicide. But there are some questions that can not be answered, atleast not in this life. |
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by Kazzy1231 on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 03:10:34 PM AEST
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| Love that poem! I understand how you must have been feeling as I feel that now. |
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Re: Beautiful Suicide
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by shattered_glass on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 04:06:07 AM AEST
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| ohh thats amazing.....it made me cry lol well thats so emotionally powerful i dont know what else to say but wow |
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