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a dead tree
Contributed by
bl00d
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 03:32:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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the oldest of fingers,
bent and thin,
the darkest of faces,
constantly staring,
the evilest legs,
small yet deadly,
a dead tree,
like an old mans fall.
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Re: a dead tree
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:48:26 PM AEST
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| I don't think you are as evil as you claim to be, a little beat up by life, yes but a lot of people have that in common; we just choose to express it in different ways. |
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Re: a dead tree
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:19:22 PM AEST
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awesome! i like the last 2 lines the most:
a dead tree,
like an old mans fall.
keep up the gr8 work! oh and welcom eto your-poetry.com! |
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Re: a dead tree
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by brew on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:36:41 PM AEST
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Such, insight to ones self in this...............Powerful, yet soft write, if one seeks, to know what tho are feeling.
Liked it
Brew~ |
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