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Two Keys
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WAE
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:20:37 PM in AEST
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I've got two keys
To the same door:
One opens it to happiness,
Another does to woe.
It's really hard to choose
Which one to take
For they are so alike.
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WAE
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Re: Two Keys
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by remote on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:31:45 PM AEST
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| Nice one Alex. |
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Re: Two Keys
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by Archie on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 06:15:19 PM AEST
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| I thought that was cool. Short and deep. I can definately relate. |
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Re: Two Keys
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by reecy on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 07:58:25 AM AEST
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very short, yet there is no need for it to be longer --- the point comes across well. Nice view,
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Re: Two Keys
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:28:44 PM AEST
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Good subtle thought there! True indeed.
Andrew |
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Re: Two Keys
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 04:48:54 PM AEST
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| Strong statement you've got here. Nice delivery, as it was short and yet was pretty strong, which I rarely see in short writes. Great work here |
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Re: Two Keys
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by inoc on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:55:20 AM AEST
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Alex I like the way you put this across to us....
a great write I hope you pick the first one the most!
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Re: Two Keys
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:17:37 AM AEST
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Nice poem, although I differ from what you are saying.ou say both the keys are alike- I can see how happiness can be equated to woe but not vice verca. Maybe if I read it a bit more I'll understand better, but this is what I think at this moment in time.
I appretiate you're work and look forward to reading you,re next piece.
Ash
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Re: Two Keys
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:46:26 PM AEST
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I understand what you do mean..
Sometimes you can have happiness.. and then, in it, you grief, regrets, stressful distress.
It does not have to be that way.. be happy, choose that door, and stay in happiness.. don't give your power away once you find it.. the only person who can make themselves sad, is that person him/herself.
Smile, choose pleasing words always.. not hard to do.. if you learn how to love and have patients.. others need your help..that is all they are really asking, to be helped.. sometimes you hear anger, frustration coming from them.. love them..
Hint.. pray to God..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Two Keys
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by Vermilion on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 04:41:47 PM AEST
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*Wide eyed, clapping*
You're amazing. That's all I can say. You put all of my poems to -shame-.
Yours,
Vermilion x |
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