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The more I gain
Contributed by
Caged Soul
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:07:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The more I gain, the more I loose.
With each new piece of information I acquire
I can feel another piece of me expire.
At times I feel I should just retire,
withdraw from life,
my war.
Each passing day
claiming casualties as they
are consumed like a goat do hay.
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Caged Soul
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2005-09-30 09:07:43] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The more I gain
(User Rating: 1 ) by remote on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:20:42 AM AEST (User
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Re: The more I gain
(User Rating: 1 ) by eternal_sorrows on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:22:19 PM AEST (User
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True emotions pour from this piece. I love the imagery you use here. Great write!
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