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The girl from the caravan
Contributed by
Rickshaw
on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:03:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I met her at a wedding ten years ago,
She talked real fast and danced real slow,
She was up on pills I was down on booze,
I loosened my tie -she took off her shoes,
Her earrings were huge and so were her eyes,
she attracted attention like ***** attracts flies,
she turned down dances from twenty guys,
But accepted my offer to my suprise,
Talked and danced all night it was really nice,
danced real close- nearly busted my fly twice,
Got that warm feeling when I looked in her eyes,
knowing the best was yet to arrive
We left the wedding headed to the site,
Her brother Johnny asked me to fight,
Said Im a lover not a fighter,
Took her inside and preceeded to ride her
I returned two days later only to discover
everyone gone including my lover,
I'll never recover from that loss,
Want to hear her saying "horse it in boss."
To find her again I'll do all that I can,
I want to find out why she ran
I met her as a boy and left as a man,
I fell for the girl from the caravan.
Copyright ©
Rickshaw
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2005-09-30 09:03:21]
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Re: The girl from the caravan
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by Spike on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:24:57 AM AEST
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Hmmm... Okay Hoss, not the tidiest poem I've read tonight, but I tip my Stetson to you for a good read and some memorable images that will either give me nightmares or sweet dreams.
How you got "horse it in boss" past the censors I don't know, and I won't tell.
And full marks for ego - that fly-busting line is as audacious as they come.
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Re: The girl from the caravan
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by Hippie on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 04:20:25 AM AEST
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I like this one, well done.
Peace,
Hippie
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