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Lunae
Contributed by
Loende
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Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:20:19 AM in AEST
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She watches, softly, without judgment
An ever watchful regent of the dark
She dances, lithely, without remorse
Pulled by the gossamer strings of God
She smiles, gently, without reason
Silver light delivered to the lost
She rises, brightly, without fail
Our Lady Luna of the Night.
Copyright ©
Loende
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2005-09-30 07:20:19]
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Re: Lunae
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by remote on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:40:01 AM AEST
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Re: Lunae
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by Caged Soul on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 08:23:01 AM AEST
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Beautifull imagery and I liked that you have written this with such simplistic elegance.
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Re: Lunae
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by Spike on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 09:15:54 AM AEST
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I share your fascination. Nice tribute.
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Re: Lunae
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:06:58 AM AEST
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Yes, but you should have written it about when she is at her best. When she kisses the sea, when they show what love is without words... nevermind, I think I'll write something about that..... Thankyou.
Take care
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Re: Lunae
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 03:48:16 PM AEST
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Like I would dare to tread upon your pen, David. Please, expand, and we will all enjoy.
Be Well,
Loende |
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Re: Lunae
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 02:18:16 AM AEST
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Beautiful piece, mo chara. I especially like the third stanza, for the glint of alliteration and the fine meaning. Keep it up!
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