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every kiss is filled with grace
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 02:20:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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When the night won't fall and the sun won't rise
And you see the best as you close your eyes
everyone knows that I'm ten feet under
till you come along and brighten my day
everyone knows that you kill the thunder
the roaring in my brain
light me up, make me feel alive
When every move seems out of place
But every kiss is filled with grace
Nothing less and nothing more
I don't know what I love you for
Everything's working out fine
You've got all the things you want and I've got mine
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paul_x_walker
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2005-09-30 02:20:22]
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Re: every kiss is filled with grace
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by justkevi on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 02:58:21 AM AEST
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Nice! I like it.
Is there a bit of underlying dissent hidden in here, or am I just grasping at straws? |
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Re: every kiss is filled with grace
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:07:32 AM AEST
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Jen that is so awsome.
You did very well.
love mom |
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Re: every kiss is filled with grace
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by Bruce on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 05:11:01 AM AEST
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| lovely, jen. mom is right as usual |
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