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The Setting Sun
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:54:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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If life passed you by
could you tell me why?
With a gentle push, you pull
deplete the will to fulfill
Can't expand a season
Can't demand a reason
Run from devotion
crawl to corrosion
The time is
now
Hold on
This moment is
fleeting
*blink*
it's gone
The future's been rehearsed
the past, only reversed
Don't do something you'll regret
cherish this love, revel in respect
With some things you shouldn't hesitate
some questions not meant to debate
Chasing shadows, life passed you by
Do you even understand why?
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:58:18 PM AEST
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| Mm a very good poem I loved it, sometimes people let life pass them buy, sometimes they don't even know it, I really believe in trying to experience everything at least one time in life, heh, I never want life to pass me by though sometimes I feel like it does, and sometimes I feel as if life controls me, very good write Scorp. SLipSiX. |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:58:57 PM AEST
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Good job Scorp, always a pleasure (even if ive been gone quite some time) to read your work, awesome once again
~Clark |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by brew on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:12:06 PM AEST
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Hey Scrop...YOU SAID IT....................The ones you try tell and see, NEVER see what they should. OH well........Cant beg , can ya.cant choose can ya, and CANT ever make them fall...........Very good write......and soooooooooo , soooooo true.! We cant choose anything we want, it all has to happen.! PFFt it doesnt
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by brew on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:15:46 PM AEST
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karma hun.karma.go and read wghat I posted back at ya on the write of mine ya just commented on.
Have to love ya
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:24:19 PM AEST
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| quit making me jealous of your talent, scorpaporpa =] i could tell you why also, fear... |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by CarolinaBlue on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:21:44 AM AEST
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Phew! Isn't that the honest truth. This one will have me thinking all night long Scorp...A constant battle life is up and down, back and forth, and you're right *blink* and it's gone. Nice job on this one.
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 02:49:27 AM AEST
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Absolutely brilliant and thought provoking, Scorperiffic.
"With some things you shouldn't hesitate
some questions not meant to debate
Chasing shadows, life passed you by
Do you even understand why?"
And as usual, how much I can relate. Truly brilliant and wonderfully worded. Questions some people may never be able to answer because they have already done something that they can't take back and will truly regret.
" Run from devotion
crawl to corrosion" Brilliant
TIMebomb
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:57:06 AM AEST
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Scorp,
This one left me speechless!! I have read it several times and must say I find this incredile. I am trying to make the most of my todays for better tomorrows , and reminding my self to let the past go! Very true, life is short and i dont want to watch from the sidelines
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 11:34:43 AM AEST
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What could i say scorpy
this write is very well written.
great job girl.
hugs |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:18:02 PM AEST
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Time is slipping to a place where the departure of feelings must rest, to stop to organize that inner self. I notice the expressions of doubts about something in the write, a part of your world that needs to be swept clean, the slate is full, erase, start again, stop, start again, stop.. big if's huh
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 12:28:25 PM AEST
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Excellent write. Powerful and so so true! You clearly got the point across in this poem. Great job... thanx for commenting :)
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 02:36:14 PM AEST
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oh that haunting feeling of life passing by to quickly each question and thought, this settles deep within the readers soul and leaves the mind to ponder. A terrific job once again!
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:12:08 PM AEST
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awesome write for the scorp!! oh this was great, scorp!! i loved it and it is only 112% true! oh jeez, this was an awesome write (as all of yours are...) great write, keep up the great work!!
~sprints |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 07:23:41 PM AEST
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Wow Such a reverie of meaning and reflection!
Wonderful write, scorpy. Easily a favourite.
~Breezy |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 05:40:13 PM AEST
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My friend life is so short. Wipe the slate clean and begin afresh. So much truth behind the lines. An outstanding masterpiece written by the talented Miss Scorp. Keep penning those emotions Scorp for you are a truly gifted poetess. Well done.
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Archie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:48:41 PM AEST
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| I was checking out the top read and was not surprised it is you. You speak with a lot of wisdom in this poem. You are truly a gifted writer. Let me know when your book comes out I will buy a copy. |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by wizard on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 11:42:42 AM AEST
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wow...you blew me away with this one...i really loved it...
wizard |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 04:44:37 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: The Setting Sun
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 11th November 2014 @ 05:26:33 PM AEST
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brilliant write, full of beautiful vivid reflection.... what would happen
tho- were the past to be rehearsed and the future reversed?
hugs n' love nessa |
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