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My Fault
Contributed by
autumn_zephyr
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:45:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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"There's nothing wrong"
- I lied
"I don't need to cry, I haven't and I'm over it"
- I do, but I won't, and I'm not.
"I don't need anyone to talk to"
- I really think I do
"I'm independant"
- I don't want to be
"It doesn't hurt, it's not getting to me"
- It does so much
"I'm fine"
- I'm really not
"I feel fine"
- I feel like I'm going to be sick
"I don't miss her"
- I do more than anything
"We didn't even talk"
- It was my fault
"She didn't love me"
- I told her I hated her
"She called me right before she died"
- She apologized for everything
"I hung up the phone"
- I couldn't stand hearing her voice
"She told me"
- It was a mistake
"I'm fine"
- It's all my fault
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Re: My Fault
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by Darkhorse71 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 04:58:09 AM AEST
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Actually, I thought this was mighty powerful. You left me stunned at the end. It just goes to show we can't lie to ourselves - and we can't be responsible for others actions.
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Re: My Fault
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 10:25:43 PM AEST
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aww... this isn't confusing, just really sad. kinda reminds me of me (well, the beggining at least). i just hope that you can find someone else who you won't be seperated from and won't feel like you can't talk to them. hope you find someone who you can share your heart with and will share their heart with you. it might take awhile, but it will come. but, back to the write, i loved the whole thing- especially the end! great write, keep up the good work!
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