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ode to reptiles
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
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Ode to a Reptile.
Crocodiles in muddy rivers, lying
low watching me…eating me. Is your
heart ever tender, do you love your
un-hatched eggs? Do you ever reflect
upon life in the mangrove, or are your
thoughts only that of survival and what
to kill for your next meal? Crocodiles
in boggy lakes do you ever pet another
crocodile? Or feel sorry for a wounded
gnu that struggle to be free of you?
Are your heart that of a warrior who
has no compassion whose only passion
is to be the biggest beast in the cruel
human swamp.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
... [
2003-01-18 20:40:00]
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Re: ode to reptiles
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by aernby on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 09:28:10 PM AEST
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an excellent twist ending -- but aren't you being hard on the crocs?
good write
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Re: ode to reptiles
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by SusieQ on
Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 10:28:08 PM AEST
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| Hello, Jan! Very discriptive! I thought I could see that old croc and you just eyeing one-another and trying to read what the other thinks, what sort of being the other is. SusieQ |
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Re: ode to reptiles
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by OreO on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:04:59 PM AEST
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Ahhh jan you have done it again girl ...beautiful write...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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