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Heartbroken
Contributed by
Dolphy
on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:29:35 PM in AEST
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This is what I get
For giving it my all
She doesn’t want me
She doesn’t care at all
When I tried my best
It wasn’t good enough
Her friends said I was no good
That I was bad stuff
So she listened to them
That night we were through
She left broken heart
Beaten black and blue
But now those times are over
I’m trying to get over her
But everything else
I see as a blur
I can’t get myself together
I can’t find a way
To live without her love
Each and every day
My mind has moved on
But my heart has not
She is the only love
That I have ever lost
Outside I am steady
I don’t want her to regret
But inside I am crying
I just can’t forget
Everything we’d been through
Everything we’ve seen
Is stuck in my head
Sewn in every seam
The stitching is coming undone
But slow is the process
Of losing her love
Copyright ©
Dolphy
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2005-09-29 14:29:35]
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Re: Heartbroken
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by JenJen on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 04:58:37 PM AEST
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such a sad poem
i do hope your heart heels soon for wot she did 2 u was unforgivable
jenni
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Re: Heartbroken
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by justkevi on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:47:53 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, and I'm not gonna spew some random "Get OVER her" crap, because it's never easy. Getting over true love is impossible, but you can lessen the pain over time.
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Re: Heartbroken
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by mjh0813 on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:44:03 AM AEST
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i liked this write.....its not everyday you see a guy actually care that much for a girl...but then the girl is not worth his love....try to hold your head up you'll find the right one im sure of it
peace and love
meg |
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