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Walk
Contributed by
wur
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:46:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Couldn't wake up
was in a daze
Swept up in that crazy phase
Long lines, eat or be eaten
Watch where you are going,
footsteps past fleeting
Time now has come,
for it all to start
What will come of our Great Apart?
Copyright ©
wur
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2005-09-29 10:46:06]
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Re: Walk
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by Archie on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:03:05 AM AEST
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| I am not sure what you mean here. I was taught to not wake a sleep walker. |
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Re: Walk
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:02:08 PM AEST
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| not quit sure about the meaning but it sounds awsome...;) if i read it enough times i'm sure i will get it.... |
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Re: Walk
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by SkC_cutie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:22:45 AM AEST
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| It sounds good. But what is it about?? It sounds like a breakup |
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