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The End
Contributed by
Channing
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Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:24:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The world in endless rolling
Rivers forever flowing
Endless winds blowing
As though know one is knowing
The thunder is rumbling
As their stomachs are grumbling
The insane are mumbling
All as the world is crumbling
She will start to cry
He will start telling lies
The birds will all fly
As everything slowly dies
-Channing-
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Channing
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2005-09-29 10:24:44]
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Re: The End
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by wur on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 10:48:11 AM AEST
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| Sounds like white stripes |
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Re: The End
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:59:55 AM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: The End
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by justme03 on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 06:13:09 PM AEST
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dats tight! love the way you described everything so i could see it and the flow of the rhymes!
luv, Kortnie or Anna lol |
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