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A Pillow of Pins & an Iron Mace
Contributed by
true-to-the-heart
on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 05:43:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Face down
in the dirt
you cant breathe
Oh do you hurt?
Poor little miss
putting up with this
I tell you
to me
your life would be bliss
so done up
pretty
you say
youre worthless
what is the purpose?
if you want i can make this
I'll cut
I'll burn
you upon
the surface
I'll smother youre pretty, delicate face
with a pillow of pins and an iron mace.
Pick off your skin till theres not a trace
Dead brown leaves I'll put in theyre place.
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2005-09-29 05:43:31]
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Re: A Pillow of Pins & an Iron Mace
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:07:40 PM AEST
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very dark write...i liked it alot...my favorate lines: "I'll smother youre pretty, delicate face
with a pillow of pins and an iron mace.
Pick off your skin till theres not a trace" |
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Re: A Pillow of Pins & an Iron Mace
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:09:34 AM AEST
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amazing write, well done
XoXo
Caiti |
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Re: A Pillow of Pins & an Iron Mace
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by crazy on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:05:36 PM AEST
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i love this poem its so dark i wish i could do the things it says to a few ppl
awsome poem |
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