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Fallen Rock Star

Contributed by spazz911 on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:59:19 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

she a rock star fallen from heaven
waiting for someone to place her again
watches hopefully when someone takes her hand
hoping for the best of it to take over again

looking for a window to let herself out
beating down glass trying to return
but without paitience she has no hope
no hope to get out and return

holding onto what comes next
afraid to loose it in the tide of life
feeling the lose of one person inside
and the birth of another in strife

can no longer recall the angel inside
it is far to tangled within the holesome ravine
for that is where it was pushed off the road and fell
lost in a thicket of drenched blood and debris

caught in a hurricane, pounding wind and rain
torn up from the inside, never to be whole again
wandering at the drop off, wheres that angel now?
but stay on that course, it will bring a new chance to fly

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-09-28 21:59:19]
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Re: Fallen Rock Star (User Rating: 1 )
by Sheaa on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 10:09:52 PM AEST
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i really liked that..a little vulgur at the end..but i really really liked it. Love your title..love the poem. keep writing. seriously.

xo
Love,
sheaa.

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