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Demolition Lovers
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:10:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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It’s dark in here.
The perpetuity of your morbid soul is sanity-depriving,
My pupils have dilated to unknown realms,
And I am... still... b l i n d .
The shadows of a violent passion molest my mind
With old lady fingers and jagged talons,
With singed velvet and coarse feathers...
I’m salivating at the thought of you
and your luscious flesh of tainted innocence,
Your lips of bitter divinity and sweet apprehension,
Your irresistible eyes and the voracity that sleeps within them...
>>>Pleasure my fingertips... >>>
Your tongue tastes like ashes and memories,
Death radiates from your tender eyelashes,
And I’m drowning in this blissful sapphire damnation
Oh, I am dying
(D.e.l.i.c.i.o.u.s.l.y.)
By the tantalizing dance your fingers are weaving inside of me...
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The night is screaming with primal ((howls))
of cataclysmic closure.
/////
Your tremulous eyes fondle my body,
My skin is left forgotten near the bedside,
I am B A R E for you,
From the inside out, the outside in,
And everything in between...
/////
Sanguine addiction. Cannibalistic lust. Decadent hunger.
Demolition lovers
of the most insidious kind.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2005-09-28 20:10:35]
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:16:27 PM AEST
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WOW!
Stephy, I have missed your poems way too much!
I LOVE this one, too.
Your descriptions are awesome, I love how you write and 'explain' things.
Fantastic write Stephy,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by Jyssvw on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:40:40 PM AEST
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| holy crap....that was an amazing ride....great work...im in awe of your talent |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:21:32 AM AEST
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A most delicately written poem of love and inhabitions that speak 4 them selves in this peice, by one who is more than adiquate on
the subject of poetry not to mention never letting her readers down, simply amazing and exquisit . . .
(((((((stephy))))))))
Ben |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:38:20 AM AEST
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Holy ***** lol hehehe
i love it. |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by CarolinaBlue on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 11:55:46 PM AEST
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Wow!!! What an amazing piece of work this is. Outstanding from start to finish is all I can say right now. Hope you post more often, your writes are always such a pleasure to experience.
~Blue~ |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 02:20:16 AM AEST
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Cannabalism is always a fun and enjoyable
dinner discussion and here I see you have
woven the dark arts of cannablism into a
wonderful poem. Anyway like I told you this is
a great poem full of wonderfulness and if you
can't tell i am really tired.
"The night is screaming with primal ((howls))
of cataclysmic closure."
Loved it ^
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Demolition Lovers
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 12:11:31 AM AEST
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I so often don't know what to say after reading your work, Stephy. I just... don't.
I must tell you, though... that I am terribly impressed... by this... by how you can manage it... by... you. Your words are always, always, so unbelievably potent. And this... this is not an exception, but rather a perfect example of just how extraordinary you are.
Don't ever stop writing, Stephy... I think your readers need it almost, perhaps, as much as you need to put it on the page.
Again having re-defined 'strength' for having stopped by your page,
~Snem |
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