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On A Quest For Love...

Contributed by eternal_dreamer on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



Gazing at the cascading stars
Each and every night
Eyes lock upon the moon
At its tranquil luminous light

Slowly her heart sets adrift
Far beyond its shores
Searching far and wide
On an endless journey once more

It searches for awhile
Yet it simply cannot find
The dock for her heart to berth in
As the lashing waves are so unkind

It craves the ultimate feeling
That has for long been lost
Her heart beacons for love
The thing it desires the most

Take heed for she is cautious
For her heart has been burnt before
Leaving her with a blackened scar
Burning deep within her core

But she holds on to hope
To find a keeper for her heart
Someone who'll love it deeply and
Break down its reigning rampart

So each and every night
As the stars cascade way up high
She begins on her heart's journey
To find her ultimate loving guy...




Copyright © eternal_dreamer ... [ 2005-09-28 18:55:15]
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Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:01:04 PM AEST
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Awww, bless you, Sue.

I hope Scorpy loves this as much as I do, it's fabulous.

It made me smile, for it is everything I would wish to say to her, too.

We love you Scorpy!

And we love you too, Sue.

Great write, my friend.
*hugs*
Phil xxx


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:13:19 PM AEST
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This is good;

"In a restless world we live in
where love's ended before it's begun
and too many moonlight kisses
seem to fade with the warmth of the sun"

From "When i fall in love" by Nat "King" Cole

Your poem reminds me greatly of the song i quoted above. Great write.


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:17:33 PM AEST
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This was so beautiful. What a wonderful dedication. So touching.
So caring. And the writing was exquisite! Wonderfully expressed.
I know scorp will love it! She IS, after all, a scorp!!!! (WE know how
it is, don't we scorp? lol) Amazing write ed!
I enjoyed this and shall return upon it many a time...

~Breezy


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:51:56 PM AEST
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Scorp will like, and heed. those of US.that really know her, would know the best.! Seems, some others try and know.yet they do not.! Well, nice deication, to a swet and soulful person.! good write.


Brew~


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 12:00:27 AM AEST
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Your writing is second only 2 your imagination and if i didn't know better i'd say u could merely wish your thought's and poetic words on 2 these pages, u r an angel of magic who creates the ultimate in poetic wonderment, along with a most compassionate and beautiful intent 2 go along with this . . .

((((((((Sue)))))))))

Ben


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:01:50 AM AEST
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Awww OMG Sue!!!! You are the sweetest, most pure of heart person I've met. I can't even tell you how fully honoured I am that I could in anyway inspire such a lovely write! This is truly special, as are you, my friend. This brought tears to my eyes, and I wish all the same and more for you.
Thank you so much Sue!!


Scorp: )
(Extremely touched)


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 08:56:13 PM AEST
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Aww Sue..
It's beautiful in it's sadness hun..
My heart breaks with every word.
Wonderful metaphors, as I love the sea..
Someone as special as you Dear,
is sure to find a port for that ship
of dreams..
Hugs and love to you-

Yours-

Billy



Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:48:59 AM AEST
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Sue this is a fantastic write:

Yes, Scorp is a beautiful person, someone will be ever so greatful to have her, it will be one of the deepest loves ever.

Your write here shows the love and care for a friend, no secrets locked up, it moves my heart, straightens out what love is like in reality from someone who gives that special care, your write is a spiritual awakening to our eyes as we read.

I know in my heart, someone out there is waiting for Scorp, just as much as she is waiting for that one beautiful deep loving man.

Thank you ever so much for this write, I appreciate your deep caring, and love.

Raquel Leah












Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 07:13:45 PM AEST
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wonderful poem ,you write so beautifully may it long continue,,hugs Eddy


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by reecy on Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 08:04:43 AM AEST
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wow, definatly the best poem iv read in a long time, i can realate to the subject, but its teh chice of words and the amazing flow of teh poem that makes it work so well i.e the theme of the heart setting adrift that is followed through throughout the poem. truely inspiring! i would love to read more of your poetry!


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:54:07 AM AEST
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A true friend she also found in you. I pray too that love may find her heart. Well written.
Take care.
David


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:11:06 PM AEST
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A sweet and gentle take on the search for true love. I particularly enjoyed the nautical images. Good luck on this quest to us all.

Spike


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 11:45:29 AM AEST
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With a heart as loving and passionate as yours, I see you finding that ultimate loving guy and riding of into the sunset on a pure white steed and living so very happily ever after (my wish for you)..Another truely beautiful write...Mike


Re: On A Quest For Love... (User Rating: 1 )
by bigduck6769 on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST
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once again you have managed to blow me away with the way you paint such a vivid scene with your words.
i love it..
=]

--ryan




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