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Untitled
Contributed by
Maxximus
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:17:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The shapeless sky bends
To illuminate the night
Casting silver moon-drops
That hold dreams in flight
The horizon holds fires that have risen again
The same visions of children and men
If these memories are as real as they seem
Then the souls of my friends eternally gleam
My heart may rest
And my breathing may slow
As the wind gently whispers "I know"
The wound has healed
But I do not wish to forget
There has not been one life
I regret
In this nameless evening of the moons ghostly thrall
Sitting peacefully alone I'm not alone at all
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Maxximus
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2005-09-28 15:17:53]
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Re: Untitled
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:11:29 PM AEST
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| good poem i liked the ending best. |
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Re: Untitled
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by anangel_1593 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:49:16 PM AEST
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| The beat is a little weird at parts, but all in all, it's a great poem. A poem i can read (after i memorize it :) ) when i'm sad or down, or i break up with one of my friends. Good stuff. Ana |
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Re: Untitled
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:21:32 PM AEST
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| I like the way you expressed yourself in this poem. |
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Re: Untitled
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by sararose1950 on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:26:19 AM AEST
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| like a glimpse into eternity- past lives-excellent |
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