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Seven Minutes for a Smile
Contributed by
remote
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:09:40 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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I sit staring at you
waiting for that smile
Don't want to blink,
for I may miss
the precious sight, your smile
Can't wait for that moment
when you'd unveil
your beautiful smile
Seven minutes I wait
with my smile mile long
looking at you trying
to hide that smile
Here it comes now
If there ever was one
a smile well worth
seven minutes and more
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by Maxximus on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:20:06 PM AEST
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| some things are just worth waiting for- simple pleasures are the core of human happiness. I can relate here, good stuff. |
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by anangel_1593 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:47:11 PM AEST
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| I have friends like that. They rarely smile. I bet if they read this poem, they'd reconsider. Keep writing. Ana |
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:55:47 PM AEST
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This is lovely.
A smile can be the most precious thing... and the most beautiful.
Me? I'd wait hours for a smile.
This is a cute write.
Phil xx |
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by brew on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:18:43 PM AEST
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I smile all I can.....and today we got a new worker.SHE.is hilarious..........a hoot. She made smile, as she said I was a nice person. Nah she isnt like that, yet.yes a smile can make ALL wonder what one sis thinking.! Nice write, and yes its better to smile than frown. I also, have a nother friend, who makes me SMILE>!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brew~ |
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:08:05 PM AEST
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this is a sweet poem like how it led up 2 the end nicely anticipated . . .
Ben |
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Re: Seven Minutes for a Smile
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by inoc on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:29:05 AM AEST
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Reading this just put a smile on my face...
I liked it how you wrote...here it comes now...
that is when I could not help but also smile
coni |
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