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a tear drops
Contributed by
shaggy2468
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 12:13:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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a tear drops
the world stops
but one tear
dosent show fear
anymore
Copyright ©
shaggy2468
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2005-09-28 12:13:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a tear drops
(User Rating: 1 ) by anangel_1593 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:41:14 PM AEST (User
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Short 'n' sweet. I like it. I'd like to see what you could do if you wrote a longer poem. |
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Re: a tear drops
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:06:22 PM AEST (User
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I know how you feel. |
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