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Sweet Bliss
Contributed by
loving_poet3088
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 10:59:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I like you alot,
But the choices I've got.
between you and her,
My judgment is nothing but a blur.
If I choose you, will it be a good decision,
Your beauty clouds my vision.
A relationship with you I visualize,
Everything that I need and love is shining at me in your eyes,
every time I close my eyes its you I see,
It's like you are watching over me.
I'm falling with all my heart,
Please can't you see this,
When I'm with you it's sweet bliss,
Mabye one day I could give you a soft, sweet kiss...
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Re: Sweet Bliss
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:39:17 PM AEST (User
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Nice poem with some sweet sentiments...It doesn't sound like there's much of a choice though! It seems to me like the 'You' in this write has already stolen your heart from 'Her'. Good luck, and keep up the writes: )
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