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Troubled
Contributed by
Davinah
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 06:22:41 AM in AEST
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Something’s quite wrong in this picture
Is it you or me; I just can’t tell
As I hurry along this wretched path,
there are so many evil things on which I dwell.
I lost all sense of self-control
Living purely on instinct and rage
Can’t find the way back to myself
Somehow I just can’t seem to turn the page
Feeding on my perfect illusions
I can’t live out the dreams that roam my mind
Distorted images of what my life should be
Turning my whole existence upside down
I need relief from this sweet sadness
This sanctimony is getting harder to keep up
But I can find peace in the hope that
one day all of this will eventually stop
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2005-09-28 06:22:41]
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Re: Troubled
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:43:39 AM AEST
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But I can find peace in the hope that
one day all of this will eventually stop
keep the faith, hope, joy, luv, peace,
emy
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Re: Troubled
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:51:15 AM AEST
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| there is obviously hope that you will find youself. know how i know? because of the line "sweet sadness" you found good in something. keep it up |
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