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Sea of Clouds
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:42:54 AM in AEST
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Waves of clouds
Erupt on unseen cliffs
Carried high by winds of every speed
Reaching heights that man
Has only dreamed about
Then coming down
And joining us
When in them we need to hide
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:13:36 AM AEST
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Good write.
It's really some thing look on the clouds while flying.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:32:57 AM AEST
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| I can perceive a meaningful symbolism in this lovely write.. :-)venkat |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:10:35 AM AEST
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| I like your choice of words in this poem.. The view is great when flying but I rather stay on the ground |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:49:15 AM AEST
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| i feel the same way everytime i fly. |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Loende on
Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 01:02:31 PM AEST
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David, this is fantastic. Gave me goosebumps, beacuse it really does evoke that feeling of flying. Well done, mo dubh.
Be well,
Dawn |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 06:02:25 PM AEST
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I like the picture. Simple, but directly taken from life (which makes much of the best poetry, methinks).
Kind of like you (don't ask me what that is supposed to mean, beyond the "simple" part).
Macsen Wledig |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Caged Soul on
Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 08:24:36 AM AEST
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I liked the visuals you created with this poem and the metaphor you created, whether this was intentional or by accident, was really powerfull.
"Giftige" write
~souLBro~ |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:58:50 PM AEST
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A remarkably gifted David who has such flare protruding from his pen. Another brilliant piece of writing to add to ur other brilliant work. Well done dear friend.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue |
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Re: Sea of Clouds
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by anitajames on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:26:12 PM AEST
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Clouds make me think of hidden secrets and mysteries that we mere mortals are not deserving to understand. The way they are always moving and changing, seem solid, but can't be touched, etc..
I'm not at all surprised that you were inspired by their beauty. Great theme.
Ann |
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