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Contributed by
strider
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:00:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Choose
My name is Choose
The child of a Muse
Who liked the booze
So, I grew up loose
That’s how my problems got fused
My fault comes in twos
Now I’m in the news
I’m wanted for a boob
My moms boob
The hangman is ready with his noose
But my name is Choose
So, they let me choose
I choose the chair and its electric fuse
I thought it would be good news
But someone blew the fuse
My time is up, all used
At the gate they let me choose
Heaven or hellish blues
My name is Choose
You know I like the blues
So, I choose the blues
Everywhere, red hot flames oozed
God! This must be doom
Advice, never let them name you Choose
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strider
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2005-09-28 03:00:37]
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Re: Choose
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 08:17:07 AM AEST
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| That was interesting. (it was probably meant to be comical) It rhymed well. |
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Re: Choose
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by mjh0813 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 09:51:32 AM AEST
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this was interesting..im in school and i laughed a little and the tacher looked at me..lol well at least im smiling right?...
peace and love
meg |
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Re: Choose
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:48:22 AM AEST
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| you have a very different style. i liked how you rhymed so much on the same word. |
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