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Eternal Sunshine
Contributed by
Channing
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:50:32 AM in AEST
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oops
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At last I have escaped my past
All the deceit has fled my body and mind
The toxins flowed through my veins every night
For there was no day, only night
Now I stand with the sun’s caress on my face
No dread of the others on my mind
No toxins in my body to corrupt my soul
Freedom is what I have, in this eternal sunshine
-Channing-
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Channing
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2005-09-28 01:50:32]
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Re: Eternal Sunshine
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:54:00 AM AEST
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| its a lot like others. but i'm sure u are a wonderful writer |
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Re: Eternal Sunshine
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 04:30:34 AM AEST
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Very unique write.
Good work.
One can feel the sunshine as they read.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Eternal Sunshine
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:05:12 PM AEST
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A wonderfully written piece of poetry u have here. I love the way you've presented ur poem. It's like escaping the clutches of depression and to feel the sun's rays again is an absolutely awesome feeling. Well done.
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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