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A Stalker's Passion
Contributed by
Channing
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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I watch you with curious eyes
If only you knew I was here
I know and see your lies
Yet see the fear
Following you to and fro
You don’t seem to notice
All about you I know
Of course, I’ve had plenty of practice
Now comes the time
That my passion will unfold
I shall pierce your spine
Then runaway as though not to bold
In the end I shall move on
And soon you’ll be born anew
So tell me how I’m wrong
Either way, this is what I do
-Channing-
Copyright ©
Channing
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2005-09-27 22:59:16]
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Re: A Stalker's Passion
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:01:05 AM AEST
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| i couldn't read that all the way through u creeped me out..... its was a good poem tho. just creeepy |
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Re: A Stalker's Passion
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:58:47 PM AEST
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Ummm...not weird...disturbing! What is happening in the third stanza?? Is the victim being raped, killed, BOTH?!?!? In my opinion, you took the whole 'stalker' thing too far.
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Re: A Stalker's Passion
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by rapnificent on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 09:04:52 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed the poem. It actually had me laughing at the end- in good humor, though- my ex husband and a boyfriend who is an ex cop came to mind. They could find me anywhere. Your poem described (what I could see in my mind to be) a movie character's point of view. Nice. |
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