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Life's Daydream
Contributed by
wizard
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:56:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I ride this wave of cloud and air
Roaming free - without a care,
Reviewing life as I've led
A simple journey through my head
I drift on past my boyhood days
Behold! The field in which I played
The boy I see I'm sure is me
Playing in my memory
Next upon my teenage years
I see I've caused so many tears
Such mistakes and malice grand
So much sadness by my very hand
My second decade passes next
It seems that half these years were hexed
More confusion and devastation
On my way toward annihilation
Then halfway through I realized
That up to now life's been disguised
So I chose the path of serenity
And walked it well for all to see
And now today this path I'm on
Though not here for very long
Seems this is where I'll remain
For here I have so much to gain
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-09-27 21:56:19]
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:59:34 PM AEST
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Loved this, and glad to see you posting , again. YES..........very well penned,
So much you have seen and done, and so much more to do
Great write Paul
We all think its doubtful at times
And then things seem to spring, from no where.!
Again, Great write.
Thanks for sharing
Brew~! |
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:30:07 PM AEST
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Wow, Wizard.... This is such a great write... very inspirational.... I love the way this is done..
Good to see you posting again...
Jenni |
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 07:31:41 AM AEST
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It is in EVERYBODY'S interest to see you posting again Bro..
I think I speak for all when I say the site was not the same without you.
It's beautiful sadness..these words,
and I can surely relate to that.
Thanks for this..
B |
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:03:18 PM AEST
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Wiz!!!!! Great to see you with a fresh post! I see you haven't lost your touch with the rhymes, and good flow. I enjoyed this write of yours, and the positivity to your words. Nicely penned, and welcome back : )
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 12:59:41 AM AEST
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Such an inspiring piece. You definately haven't lost ur touch.Much wisdom passed on through the verses. It's really great to read ur work again. A very talented poet you sure are. Well done Paul.
*hugs*
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Re: Life's Daydream
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 09:27:37 PM AEST
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The title is perfect, as is much that follows it . . .
I positively LOVE writes like this. It touches the soul
in a way that is too few and far between.
"Then halfway through I realized
That up to now life's been disguised"
These two incredible lines . . . so much said with so few
words. An honest, and brave outpouring here. Almost
cleansing in it's telling.
It appears, dear wiz, that you have been awakened, even
since this . . .
~Breezy |
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