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Crystal Light
Contributed by
highly_flammable
on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Crystal light
Shines so bright
On a birth
Of greater worth
A crystal rain
To earth it came
On the soil
A snake's coil
A crystal wave
For me to save
Slides up the sand
Onto the land
A crystal stone
That turns to bone
Time to take flight
Start on this plight
A crystal pure
I'm to endure
Then on a whim
I think of him
A crystal light
Shines so bright
Shines on you
Your time is due
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2005-09-27 21:48:12]
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Re: Crystal Light
(User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 12:48:05 AM AEST
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I appreciated this write,I found it very original.I especially liked the 3rd stanza,I could picture it.Great work,
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Re: Crystal Light
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by toddy29 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:49:58 AM AEST
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| Thanks for your comment. I like your poem because you took something so simple and changed it to represent so many things. Nice work! |
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Re: Crystal Light
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by Pisces101 on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 02:06:22 AM AEST
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| nice |
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