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Trust
Contributed by
sararose1950
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:33:32 PM in AEST
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One starlit night it called to me-
A voice so clear,what could it be?
In unison the wind cried "trust"
I tried not to hear-but hear it I must
It guides my thoughts-it quiets my fears
It gives me hope- it releases my tears
From forever before-until forever the end
It has taken this lost soul on a path -to a friend
Copyright ©
sararose1950
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2005-09-27 21:33:32]
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Re: Trust
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by brew on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:48:23 PM AEST
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I thought, this was a very devoted write, to some one who you had, in your life, that was a #1 trusted soul.! Very deep, and very inner, lovely write.! We all need a ONE like that.and we they are found, they never really die.! Such passion
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Re: Trust
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by highly_flammable on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:59:09 PM AEST
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| This is an amazingly well written poem. You put your thoughts into words beautifully. Everyone needs a forever friend. I'm sorry for your loss. I'll look forward to reading more from you. Once again, great job. |
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Re: Trust
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by Ravensfire on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 03:28:50 PM AEST
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| Very well written and expressed, I know the feeling. |
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Re: Trust
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 07:14:50 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written. |
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Re: Trust
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by dobad on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 09:27:08 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write and wonderful tribute to the loss of someone dear. |
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Re: Trust
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 29th September 2005 @ 02:53:36 PM AEST
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A profound write. I really like this. Good flow to this poem too. Keep it up!
Welcome to YPDC: )
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Re: Trust
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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Beautifu; Sara. Yes trust we must.
Everythig depends on it.
Trust encompasses the 3 casrdinal virtues, Love, Faith, Hope and Love.
Thanks for sharijg this with us.
Blessings
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Re: Trust
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 22nd February 2006 @ 08:38:21 PM AEST
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sararose1950
Trust
Sararose your forever friend eyes you each day.
Within the communion of saints she prays for you.
Its sad to lose a friend,but you gained an angel.
In the Glory of God you have a friend.
Look heavenward he/she is with you a forever friend.
Beautiful touching poem
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