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What is Change?
Contributed by
toddy29
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:17:41 PM in AEST
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Change, how does one accomplish this feat?
It takes more than mere intuition to beat
It is not the altering of ones mind to be new
Nor the forcing to change what you do
Never is it the removal of the deepest soul
And never can it be the completion of one goal
But change is the process that life must make
So that pain is removed from every mistake
Change is the search for the worries that hide
The removal of catalysts causing the hurt inside.
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Re: What is Change?
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by highly_flammable on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 09:51:56 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. It really gets the message across. You explain change extremely well. Your words are truth. Great job and keep up the good work. |
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Re: What is Change?
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:10:49 PM AEST
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| cliche rhymes, but wonderful intentions :D good job |
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