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crazy house
Contributed by
grim6669
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:53:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i'm walking down the tunnel of time,
somewhere trapped inside my mind,
i looked to the left and saw a sign,
i looked to the right and fell behind,
but for some reason i can't see straight,
i'm losing it and i can't concentrate,
i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore,
i'm stuck in this white padded room,
i'm in a straight jacket i cannot move,
slam my body against the wall,
hit face first and begin to fall,
i'm stuck in this crazy house,
i wanna get out right now,
release me unlock the doors,
i'm not crazy anymore
eyes closed, bloody nose, confused mind, can't find the real me, i am a black hearted dark dream, come find me.
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Re: crazy house
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by remote on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 03:59:47 PM AEST
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| That's one hell of a poem, loved it, probably would qualify as the best one I read today. |
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Re: crazy house
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by grim6669 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:04:33 PM AEST
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| well thank you remote....i'm blushing!! |
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Re: crazy house
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:10:35 PM AEST
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| awsome write..havn't read one this good in a while..thanks for posting it.;) |
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Re: crazy house
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 04:52:34 PM AEST
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| wow...this is really good, i liked it alot...i havent read a poem like this yet ...keep up the good writing |
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Re: crazy house
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by Lin54 on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:48:11 PM AEST
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| Your poem reminds me of cabin fever and I can feel the emotion of seeking in the words! |
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Re: crazy house
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:55:22 PM AEST
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Wow theres a write. Yes confusion is common for the depths of crazy. I know Ive visited Crazy more then a few times. Good write and yes I felt that crazy all the way through.
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Re: crazy house
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:55:46 PM AEST
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| I've certainly felt like that before....nice... |
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Re: crazy house
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by bit_me on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:16:11 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this one... Alot. lol |
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