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broken hearts
Contributed by
suicidal_imbecile
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Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:03:12 PM in AEST
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I wonder to myself why I can not write of happiness
Because I feel meteocer and everything less
My butterflies crumble beneath my pain
How many gallons of blood have I drained?
And how much more will come?
Depressions growing with the decreasing sun
I want you to kiss away these imperfections
But you back away like I'm a growing infection.
Lock me up
Im nothing to you anymore
close and lock that once familar door
Kate Ecklund
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Re: broken hearts
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 02:11:58 PM AEST
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Very sad and brutally honest.... It's heartwrenching to read such a poem and i hope that you find some measure of happiness before too long.
Keep up the strong writing!
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Re: broken hearts
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 18th October 2005 @ 02:50:48 PM AEST
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Heartwrenching write.. Full of pain.. I thought this was really amazing how you decribed it and the way it flowed.. great job
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Re: broken hearts
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by Lips on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 02:32:43 AM AEST
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"i thought i loved him, even worse i thought he loved me."
How often do we go through that. So sad and wonderfully written. This pain I know and can relate to! |
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